2020-09-27 Daily-Challenge

Today is Sunday, so I decided to review the challenges I've done this week.

my second answer of example on P18-19:

• remove the underline, underline is always a bad choice, see P154.
• change the font of the title.
• use lowercase for the rest of the title.
• use smaller font os there is more space.
• use different font-weight for dish name and description.

reference answer is one more difference:

• don't use uppercase for all text in the main body.

my second answer of example on P22:

• reduce the picture size to leave space.
• change the text to remove repeated content.
• shorten the distance between bullets and items.
• separate contact information.
• remove unnecessary Phone:/Fax:.

reference answer:

• shorten the distance between bullets and items.
• add space between pictures to separate them.
• the text needs to be separated from photos.
• to separate from photos, location, and contact information need more space.
• this poster is crowded on both sides, but there is a lot of space at the top and bottom.
• remove redundant content in the text.

my second answer of example on P30:

• right top one
  • use various width so central alignment is more clear.
  • use a different font so it isn't long and big.
  • the font is cute.
• left bottom one
  • background figure is interesting.
  • use various width so central alignment is more clear.
  • reduce the font size.
• right bottom
  • add a text background.
  • use various width so central alignment is more clear.
  • background figure is interesting.

reference answer:

• right top one
  • use various width so central alignment is more clear.
  • use a different font so it isn't long and big.
  • the font is cute.
  • spacing between is consistent.
• left bottom one
  • background figure is interesting.
  • alignment is obviously central align.
  • reduce the font size.
• right bottom
  • add a text background.
  • use various width so central alignment is more clear.(I thought it should have!)
  • background figure is interesting.
  • font-weight is strong, so it looks strong.

my second answer of example on P37:

• unified width of items.
• put phone numbers in front so there's no discord blank.
• use . rather than - to separate phone numbers.
• use · instead of , to separate location, professional.(half, remove combination of comma and period)
• add blue ribbon background for website.
• use same spacing between for item details.
• enlarge the logo.
• increase font size of title.
• add picture in the blank.
• [] use left alignment for all items.
• [] gather the welcome messages together.
• half a pound more of serif.(I can only find it on Woman ...)

reference answer has two more differences:

• spell out Appt(Appointments)
• increase the font of the website and use uppercase so it becomes more readable.

my second answer of example on P38-39:

• use 1 em instead of 0.5 inch for indent.
• remove border of picture and align it with text.
• use left alignment for subtitle.
• first paragraph doesn't indent.

reference answer has one more difference:

• these lines are wide enough, so you can adjust the font to align with both ends.